Regardless, based on the books I am reading, there is nothing wrong with the short non-sentences in the second paragraph. Moreover, the fact that this has nothing to do with the bulk of the post is acceptable, too.
What you read is pure Lenore. I write from the heart and off the cuff. Having entertained my friends for years with my crazy thoughts and behaviors, I decided to broaden my audience. I hope you enjoy the show, which is my reality.